
The obstacles were always there,
Sometimes they made me slow,
Sometimes gave a blow,
But never did I think, to change my way.
Now to my face stands a wall,
Wish I could see, but its way too tall.
But heyy!! Over there, I see two doors,
One’s in the way, and the other’s off road.
The way up there, the door weighing a tonne,
Has what I always wanted,
What I spent my life on.
It tempts me still, but the journey gives a low.
The other door, though its easier to go,
It would be hell throughout,
NO friends NO foes.
The stars up there, are calling upon,
Shouting,
They make me feel a moron.
Go for your dream, you’ll get what u want.
Am walking still, on the way I was,
I’ll listen to them, they say my heart.
Yes I was, screwed up by each circumstance,
The OBSTACLE was deep, it left no chance.
But am geared up now, with every penny n dime,
To scale the WALL,
To screw the circumstances this time.
bhai tu chhod company,mba...full time writer,poet ban jaa....
ReplyDeleteengg student me itni creativity....m surprisingly impressed
welcum to Blogger world...........
ReplyDeleteWow!! anshul ... a debut attempt... awesome it was ... u know , i think u and me are on the same track now... i found the sentiments quite similar to one of my latest poems...i.e, enough life , u played ur part , now its my turn....
ReplyDeletevery gud attempt dear.....abhi toh shuruvat hai teri agge agge....... tu bot agge jayega ki log kahenge......;)
ReplyDeletewell thnx guys... i din expected dis much appreciation for it :)
ReplyDeletend @vicky...yaar ab tune kaha hai to i'll definatly thnk about being a poet :d
will come wid my next piece soon...keep d comments coming..it helps me speed up :p
gr88 poem Anshul...and its really hard to believe that it comes from a beginner.. but must say..an amazing piece of work!! superb use of words and the way u hv made them rhyme..its so natural...!! i read it earlier but cudnt drop a comment then.. simply fantabulous work man!! and ya.. do consider the advice given in the first comment..lol..
ReplyDeletekeep going.. cheers!
anshul.....i still dnt believe....i meant..u n poet...bt good efforts...doing good job... i ve no words...bt u write awesome..hats off to u...keep it up..... god bless u.
ReplyDeletethnx again to both of u...i myself never believed i cud write smthing (or say anythng) nd get such comments for it too :)
ReplyDelete@ankita..ya am gonna consider it now...kuch publish hoga to at least i know i'll sell these much copies of it :D
@neetu dear u have to believe dis...i agree i talk rubbish most of d time...bt den at times kuch aisa aisa bhi aajata hai :-) ..thanx a lot..
hii.. really g8..good effort to giv impressive words to ur thoughts ..wel try to publish some n increase ur cretivity..keep improving..good luck
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