Sunday, September 6, 2009

Let Me Be




Destiny they say,

Crosses everyone’s way.

If it walks along, all good,

Bt if it chooses not to

It does make you pay.


You’re termed a loser, the moment you talk about luck,

But he is looking for the key,

That would open the lock, that he always finds stuck.

Why until then, they can’t just let him be.


What already bugs him all day, that

You can’t make him realize.

So stop reminding it over and again,

Keep to yourself, your valuable advice.


He’s working on it, guiding the wave on its course,

Their giving directions, provide no helping force.

Its like walking in rain, at the edge of seas,

The steps he took were, washed off as if felonies.


He ain’t no loser, just going through a rough patch,

Things he knows, have to be started from scratch.

To them I admit, this HIM is me,

And why the hell they can’t let ME,. Be me….


13 comments:

  1. anshul.....let me be....kahan kahan se itna sochte ho....i think u should go to sm publisher..wo hi kuch kr skta hai....hehe

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  2. kuch bhi ho....mast sochte ho.....

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  3. hmm....
    ok..
    its been rightly said dat dis z ur own platform u cn alwaz b urself here only if ppl cant "let U be U"....
    newz nicely jotted down..!!!!!!!!:)

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  4. @neetu...thnks...bs apne aap hi aata rehta hai mind mey sab...nd u already know kis respect mey likha hai ye sab...meri life ki tragedy :)

    @pallavi...ya blogging is a way to let out ur frustations...dat too in d way u want...ppl listen to u nd praise for it...haha...
    thnx anyways..

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  5. hmmmm.. didnt know u can write this well... will have to keep coming back to read ur blogs Anshul.. i am truly surprized...

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  6. i know very well.....bt few ppl are surprized.....???...i wasnt surprized bt shocked..hehe

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  7. nd see the effect..followers list getting increased..day by day...so keep it u.. hum tumhaare saath hain...hehe

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  8. sure...will try to come up with smthing soon...nd it feels good dat i cud surprise you... :)

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  9. @neetu....ya am also keeping my eye on dat...8 followers till now...lets see mera fan following aur kahan yak jaata hai... :)
    nd dnt get shocked yet...dis is apparently only a part of d talents i have ..lol...thre's more to come... :D

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  10. nice hai ...like d way u presented it in second person....kitni mahine ho gye tere? try putting google adsense

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  11. haan main bhi ab soch hi rha tha...abhi 5 months hue hain so still a month before i can activate it... :|

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  12. hmmmmm....really gud hai..!!!!MBA chodh yaar ...tu buks likhna shuru kar...:D

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  13. hmm...thanx bhai...bt book likhne mey abhi thoda time hai.. :)

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